
I never was one for thinking up titles. It's a fact that was brought into sharp, embarrassing focus this past Tuesday, when my novel, which was tentatively titled "A Personal NaNoWriMo," for "National Novel Writing Month," was critiqued by my wonderful writing group.
Three of the four of them said, "What's that mean?" Oops.
It was a really, really nice critique session. I learned a lot from this group, and this session, in particular, has me feeling ever so much better about where my writing is, and the next steps I should take. I think this book, which is still as yet untitled, is in a good place, but I definitely need to slap a title on it and fix more problems before it's ready for submitting.
Probably the best news that came from this group is that we will be going on for quite a bit after my imminent departure from Chicago for New York. Our next two meetings will occur when I'm in town, so that will make me happy. And, although we worried that there wouldn't be enough projects for us to review, it turns out that there are! Hooray! At least I get to hang on to this life for a little while longer.
We went to visit the new apartment in White Plains on Wednesday. We had originally packed our running kit, since we were both hoping to get our one-hour runs in there, take advantage of our new home's proximity to the Bronx River Pathway, but we didn't get any chance to do it at all, as there was so much to do in the new place, just measuring and figuring out where we were going to put everything, and what we were going to have to get rid of.
Fortunately, our storage room is enormous, a solid 13 x 8 feet, so we'll have that room to play with. I'm quite excited, although I'm sad to be leaving here, of course.
The new place has a pool and its own dog park. It faces a gorgeous park in which dogs aren't allowed. There's a shock of elevation in this teeny park, which is only about a third of a mile long and half again as wide, but there are trees and interesting rock formations and even a playground.
I hope we'll find a good community there.
There is a massive downside to the apartment...it's covered in Berber carpet. Yuck. Oh well. We'll just have to put some nice rugs down. Here's a photo of the living room. :)
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